MrKeatonsPicture

Of course it is good and shows your emerging style, but if I'm going to pay you for a drawing, I want it to be great. What is great- the face is perfect: coloring, shading, eyes, wouldn't change a thing. There is a clear emotion coming through which is something your drawings from just a year ago did not have. What is good- coloring of the hair, shirt, and arm: it is fine and good enough for a sketch, but for a finished work it is a bit too scribbly. What needs work: the black and white sleeves and that background: seriously, what's up with the background? Yes, it's good and impressive but it makes her look like she's in a '70s music video. Change it if possible.
I really am impressed with how far you've come over three years. Imagine how good you'll be three years from now!